Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Describing a beach

A bright blue day, the sky dotted with patches of white. The sea reflected the sky, with varying colours to deep blue in the deeper seas, and a light green nearer to the shore. The waves in the deep were high and foamy, but when it reached the shore, they lapped almost lazily, with not a single splash. The corals in the sea gave the sea a dark portion here, and another one there, as if on a moldy piece of bread. A little bit of the beach jutted out, yellow, with it turning whiter and whiter each timethe water passed over it.

1 comment:

  1. The introduction of the day is not very good as the picture is clearly not a bright blue day. The sea doesn't seem to be reflecting the sky. The varying colours and the green and the waves description are all very good.

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